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My Life Quest -- 6.6 From the Material to the Spiritual

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akanekou 发表于 2009-03-05 15:21:10


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My Life Quest -- 5.13 You need a lead umbrella on occasion

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akanekou 发表于 2008-12-22 11:40:42

我用一生去寻找/第五章：《超脱之想》/ 13.偶尔需要一把铅伞
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My Life Quest -- 4.10 Humankind will enter into its maturity

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akanekou 发表于 2008-12-16 11:11:02

我用一生去寻找/第四章：美丽新世界/人类即将进入成熟期
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My Life Quest -- 3.1 Action through inaction

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akanekou 发表于 2008-12-16 11:11:20

我用一生去寻找/第三章：理想照进市场/无为而治
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My Life Quest -- 1.1 Everyone bears an opportunity for you

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akanekou 发表于 2008-12-16 11:04:00

我用一生去寻找/第一章：爱与敬的成功学/每个人都怀有你的机会
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My Life Quest2.8 Only collective negotiation has universal value

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akanekou 发表于 2008-11-26 14:43:27

这是zachherold修改后的版本~其实算是人家重新写了一遍，汗~
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My Life Quest -- Key Words:Ideals

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akanekou 发表于 2008-11-21 10:12:13

ideal
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你从未见过的水星

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akanekou 发表于 2008-11-07 10:05:27

NASA的信使号太空探测器拍下了从未展现在人类面前的水星照片，揭示了太阳系最内部行星的神奇之处。
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这不是方法篇，是职业篇...
-- 丘雨岑 对《怎么赚到一百万》的评论

每个人都怀有你的机会 Everyone's Got a Chance 有一句话叫做“真理不是说出来的，而是干出来的”。一个年轻人大学毕业，走入社会，就进入了复杂的人际关系中。社会是很多人际关系的总和，你必须了解他人，与人谋事，而不是无目的地拉人闲谈，这样才能不虚度光阴，完成“社会实践”。你一定会与某些人达成关系，人类是社会性的动物，与他人必有关系是你无法回避的命运。世界上的事都是人际关系的构成和发展，关系，关系，还是关系。 As the saying goes, the truth arrives through one's hands rather than the mouth. Our youth graduate from university into the real world, where relationships between people are complexly intertwined. In a world that is the sum total of all interpersonal relationships, the key to accomplishing our "practical training" is getting to know others and working with them, rather than wasting time on aimless chatters. We are certain to enter into relationship with people, as humans are social beings (organisms/animals/creatures??) with the inevitable fate of connecting with others. And all the world's happenings are but causes and results of relationships, relationships, and again relationships. 一个关系达成，必然有事发生。这件事情结束了，人际关系却变化了。有可能增减了成员，或者增减了感情。经过几轮事件后，你可能会形成一个小圈子。渐渐地圈子有了特性，忙的时候齐心协力，做着熟悉的生意，闲的时候表现某些文化、品味，去K歌或者打保龄球什么的。这时候估计你就感觉你的“社会实践”成功了，大约正好是孔子说的“三十而立”的时候。 As a relationship takes shape, activities are certain to take place. Each event shifts the relationship by leaving behind change, ending in more or less participants, and tighter or looser bonds than before. Through a series of events, we might gradually begin to form a circle, one with distinct characters where everyone joins to do their all-so-familiar business, and again gathers to relax at culturally tasteful events... Karaoke, bowling and such. It is then that we may feel a success at our "practical training," and at a timing similar to the Confucius notion of "independent at thirty." 目前位置。 好久不见，挺怀念的。如不介意我就慢慢找回节奏吧。。。
-- haihaola 对《My Life Quest -- 1.1 Everyone bears an opportunity for you》的评论

不想一辈子给老板干活,一直想着创业， 可是却一直没找到适合自己的创业项目， 要么缺少资金而苦恼，要么缺乏经验屡屡受挫。 在不断的探索中，无意中发现了一个很好的网上创业项目， 在线愿与大家一同分享： QQ: 603226418 励志照亮人生，创业改变命运. QQ603226418 分享创业机遇.
-- zhering 对《怎么赚到一百万》的评论

24条： 1. Now we are at the information age, feel dizzy as drowned in the flood of ubiquitous information. ：feel应为feeling，as去掉。 2. There are many ways lead to quietness down the ages：ways后面少了一个that 3. Now a lot of people go to temples to feel the solemnity instead of to pray.：of 后面可以直接加to么？ 4. consciousness of eternity and insignificant of oneself：insignificant应改为名词。 5. Not long ago I had a chat with a friend of climbing enthusiast：a friend of climing enthsiast意思是登山爱好者的朋友，而原文意思是说，我的朋友是登山爱好者。 6. the troubles bothered him everyday all disappeared. ：troubles后面少了that 7. 注意，除固定搭配外，可数名词要么是复数，要么加冠词或定语。"in daily life", "in brain"这样的用法都欠妥。 8. Nevertheless, Lying down to relax body tiredness help to get into quietness.：首先，Lying首字母要小写。其次，help后面要加s。 9. As scitific research shows：scitific拼写错误。 10. For people who sit in front of computer for long：参见第7点，computer加s。 11. their neck bones will memorize the long-term intense feeling and keep your brain away from rest.：their和your的人称指代不一致。 12. find a comfortable pose, then pray again and again, especially say the prayers repeatedly. ：反复祈祷并非pray again and again（一次又一次地祈祷），而是repeat prayers。此外，especially后面出现了问题。这句话简析为： do sth., and then do sth., especially do sth.在especially之前，句法没问题，但是imperative sentence里，如果三个连用，应该是, do sth., do sth. else, and then do ....，especially并非连词，属用法错误。 13. The simple prayers：去掉the。 14. the "shielded" state of isolation：the改为a 15. far from the secular affairs--have brain rested and feel the existing world whole-heartedly：请问，have的主语是谁？我找不到。而且，这里也不是无主句/祈使句。 have the brain rested用的是have sth. done的句型，而这样的句型是指找其他人做这件事情（请回忆高中课堂），因此用法不妥。 16. too many things are bothering：bother是及物动词。 17. the more difficult to get into the state：difficult后面加it is，不可省略。 18.Another case happens when you are too tired, repeating the prayer brings on drowsihead, ：注意！！第一个逗号之后，出现了一个完整的句子。因此，第一个逗号应改为句号。 19. is the key part-communicate with God.：破折号之后应该是名词性质的，因为其涵义和the key part等价，所以应该为communicating with God. 20.by whole-heartedly involving：involviving这里是名词性质，因此，whole-heartedly应改为形容词形式，去掉ly。 21. so many people's heart ：heart加s，这么多人不可能共用一个心的。 22. We improve the former in learning and thinking, while the latter in the process of meditation. ：former和latter指代不够明确，因为前一句写的不够简练。因此，建议用intelligence和spirit and soul代替former和latter。 23. urgenter：more urgent 24. than at anytime of history：既然是比较，就要加上now。now that at any time in history. in比of更好。
-- 挑刺的童生 对《My Life Quest -- 5.13 You need a lead umbrella on occasion》的评论

多谢！那拜托你继续帮我改改吧~呵呵
-- akanekou 对《My Life Quest -- 1.1 Everyone bears an opportunity for you》的评论

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